PEER FEEDBACK

Peer Feedback From Jodie Winter-Brook

Strenghts

• I like the images on your  contents page, I think they indicate you're indie rock genre very well.
• The colour scheme compliments the first image however I think you could possibly edit the second image to make it duller and then it will look more professional.
• I like how the title is placed at the top.
• I think another colour on your contents page is needed due to the fact that the page titles look a little dark.

Improve

• The rounded corners look misplaced with the square borders on your photo and page titles so I think you should choose on or another.

Peer Feedback From Rachel Bower

Strengths

• I like the way you have  separated regulars, features and fashion into different columns using backgrounds and background for the heading this makes it look tidy and conventional.
• I like the images used although the image with two people in needs to be less bright to match your other image.
• The title is bold and catches your eye, I like the font you have used as it stands out.

Improve

• You need to add a few more stories to your contents to make it look busier
• brighten up the wording a little bit more so it stands out.

THESE WILL LOOK A LOT BETTER WHEN YOU USE THE SECOND LOT OF IMAGES YOU TOOK TO CREATE YOUR FINAL CONTENTS PAGE